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Obituaries

Use the standard obit form, which means put the following items in the following order:

Harrower's Check List
  1. Name: Use full names, including middle name or initial. Nicknames, if commonly used, can be added in quotes. Please double-check all spellings.
  2. Identification: Find a phrase for your lead that best summarizes who this person was or what he/she did: John Jones, a prominent local dentist or Jane Jones, author of 29 crimes novels. Later in the story, you can elaborate on the details.
  3. Age: State it simply unless the family asks you to omit it: Jones, 57, died Monday. He was 57.
  4. Day/place of death: Give the day of the week. Omit the time unless it's relevant for some dramatic reason. If the death occurred out of town, name the city; otherwise, give the local location (hospital, at home, etc.).
  5. Cause of death: Some publications omit this out of respect for the family's privacy; some omit it only in certain cases such as suicide or AIDS. Most avoid grisly details, summarizing by simply saying 'he died of lung cancer.'
  6. Birth date/birthplace.
  7. Background: Education, military service, honors, career achievements - the amount of personal history you include will vary. The more prominent the person, the more in-depth the obit usually is, incorporating anecdotes and quotes from friends, family and colleagues.
  8. Survivors: name those in immediate family: spouse, children, parents, siblings.
  9. Funeral/burial information: Include the name and phone number for the funeral home, so readers can call for details.
Lead (Usually two sentences, with second sentence being the age)
  1. Full name
  2. Identifying phrase best summarizing who this person is and what they did
  3. Day/Place of death
  4. Cause of death
  5. Age, stated simply
Rest of Story
Birthday if you have it/Birthplace
Background (Remember to Attribute.)
  1. Education
  2. Military Service
  3. Honors
  4. Careers
  5. Achievements
  6. Family
Survivors (include city where survivors live. Punctuate correctly.)

Visitation-Funeral Service-Burial Information (put in chronological order)

Sources

  • Mortuary
  • Relatives, friends.
  • Newspaper clippings.
  • References (Who's who)
  • Police, coroner
  • Hospital
  • Attending physician